Soooo for my College Writing class we had to write an Op-Ed as an assignment. She said we could write about anything, and since I’m never great at deciding on a topic I figured I would do what I do best (and write about most). I searched around on blogs to find a topic that was interesting and could get me going, and settled on this post at Junkfood Science, about how children in Australia are being policed by teachers and stuff.
Now, myself being a procrastinating college student, held off writing this until… well, now. So I wish I would’ve done it earlier as to have any tips/advice about the writing- or what I could word differently or something (Teachers always say to have peers read it and give opinions on it and such).. But sadly, I’m handing it in tomorrow, sooooo if there is something in it written very terribly, well, don’t tell me lol because there isn’t anything I can do about it and it’ll just make me freak out about the paper, since it is due tomorrow at 10 AM. So, feel free to read it anyway. I haven’t ever written an Op Ed before (hell, I didn’t even know what they were before) so I hope it isn’t too awful and I hope it reads like an Op Ed should (she gave us like 4 examples, but I still dunno if mine fits okay)…. Sooo yeah, here it is lol.
(of course, if anyone reads this before midnight tonight- I’ll probably still be awake by then- feel free to leave any tips, since I’ll have time to edit it until then)
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Attack of the Lunch Police
Packing your own lunch shouldn’t be a crime, and it definitely shouldn’t be the governments job to decide what you can and cannot pack. But for schools in Australia this is what the future holds. Principles in Australian schools want to give teachers the authority and power to “police so they can confiscate chips, chocolates and sugary sweets to ensure children are healthy” according to the Herald Sun. This is wrong on so many levels. When did it become okay for schools to choose what is best for the students? It should be the parents’ job, not the schools’ or the governments’ or anyone else’s, to decide what is best for their child. The idea of having schools regulate children’s food intake seems like a scary movie, but it is all too real.
This is along the lines of having schools send home BMI report cards to children and parents. Or how in Japan a national law was passed that requires that companies and local governments measure peoples waistlines. When did the government become so involved with our bodies? What gives them the right to decide and make our choices for us? How can we be free when we can’t even decide for ourselves what foods we choose to eat?
For that matter, why is Body Mass Index (BMI) seen as such an accurate measure of one’s health? BMI was created in 1835- 174 years ago- around the same time Phrenology was accepted as highly scientific. So basically a few people got together and decided what weight was acceptable for what height, using some formula they created, and we have stuck with it ever since. We base an individual’s health, along with so many other factors, on this number. It is also not often mentioned that in 1998 the government changed the cut off numbers for BMI, which made 30 million Americans go from “healthy” to “overweight” overnight- something many reports that talk about how obese people are getting fail to mention). Many reports and studies also fail to mention that they are receiving funding from diet companies, pharmaceuticals, and other donors- all who make money off of people believing they need to lose weight. Because it’s all about health!
Healthy eating is of course a big proponent of living a longer, healthier life. I’m not arguing that eating nutritious food is a bad thing, nor am I advocating to simply eat foods that are considering to be non-nutritious until you feel sick. Schools that provide healthy food options are doing no wrong. Schools that offer apples along with cookies are not the devil incarnate. They are simply offering a choice. That is all they should be doing. It is when they decide what is the only acceptable food is when things become ridiculous. Or in the case of Australian schools, policing what children brought from home- which was not even food from the school. We have come so far as to not allow children to take a piece of birthday cake to school on their special day- because it’s not “healthy”.
A nice summary of the problems with these techniques of sending home BMI reports or policing lunch boxes is summed up nicely by this quote from a Newswise Medical News study about how overweight teens have same eating disorders as thin peers, “The data are striking – talking about weight, worrying too much about diet, focusing on it increases risk not only of eating disorders, but also of being overweight.”
Attaching morality to food does nothing but create a false sense of righteousness for eating foods that are “good” and feeling intense shame after eating foods that are “bad”. This also leads to extending those same feelings to individuals that are thought to exemplify them. We need to learn to balance. We need to listen to our bodies and do what is best for them, whether that means having some chocolate or having some fresh fruit, or going for a walk to the park, or taking some time off to relax from a busy and stressful day. We need to stop continually punishing and shaming them. We need to stop looking at food as a moral objective. What we eat does not make us a good or a bad person.
What is healthy or not should not be decided by the government or by anyone other than themselves. Health is a personal and individual matter and it needs to stay that way.
Well, I finally got around to reading this and it’s great!! I think that she will appreciate this paper. I totally didn’t know that they were policing children about their food????why on earth would anyone do that??? good job and keep up the writing!!!
By: Nikki on February 2, 2009
at 8:12 am
I’ve often checked out your blog, but i think this is the first time I’ve commented.
In reading this post about your paper… I’ve got to say that I admire you so much. I know it can be ESPECIALLY hard sticking to your HAES guns especially when you’re younger. The pressure to conform is ridiculously hard.
Not only do you stick to what you believe – you also express your ideas so well. Keep up the blogging, girl. You are an awesome role-model for women of all ages, but especially the young ones who are really feeling that pressure.
I hope your paper makes some waves!!!!
By: angrygrayrainbows on February 5, 2009
at 11:37 am
bmi is stupid. it wasn’t originally created to tell people that they need to lose weight. it was created by Adolphe Quetelet to see differences between active and inactive people of the same heights and weights. additionally, it is not accurate per height, becuase it just keeps doubling instead of increasing exponetially.
i want to meet the person who started using bmi for identifying overweight individuals and school them!!
By: another annoyed person about bmi on February 6, 2009
at 11:23 am
Junkfood Science is one of my favorite blogs; as an engineering student and informed citizen, I expect government regulations and recommendations to be grounded in sound science. Often, they are not, and you’ve done a good job explaining some of the popular myths surrounding childrens’ health.
Your sentiments are not likely to be very popular among the liberal elite who dominate higher education, however. Your observation that “It should be the parents’ job, not the schools’ or the governments’ or anyone else’s, to decide what is best for their child” is correct – but efforts to undermine parental authority and replace it with government babysitting are widespread (character education, anyone?) and almost exclusively concocted by the left.
This notion you have that government ought not interfere with individual freedoms regarding our bodies and our children may make you more conservative than you think.
Good luck out there.
By: Callie on February 9, 2009
at 12:30 am
Your piece is well-written, but in future, it would be a good idea to make sure the apostrophes are in the right place, that you use the right words (a school principal is spelled princiPAL, not principle) etc – you know, just so you don’t come across as ill-educated.
By: Staci on February 15, 2009
at 8:20 pm
The essay looks good to me! I really hope this doesn’t pass into law in Australia because seriously, it’s nuts. My cousin’s kids are growing up in Australia and our family tends towards stocky builds – will people think she’s abusing her kids and start confiscating their cookies? Since when is it the government business to regulate people’s eating habits?
The OMG METABO WE’RE ALL GOING TO DIE panic in Japan actually bothers me even more, though. Japanese people on average are very thin already, their government deciding that they need to be even thinner is just batshit. I work as a music journalist and work with quite a few Japanese bands – these guys are seriously thin already, the idea that anyone thinks Japan of all places has an “obesity epidemic” is just insane. Not to mention that getting the government involved is bad enough, getting people’s employers involved is even worse.
BTW, does anyone have a link to the old, pre-1998 BMI chart? I’m just curious about how much they shifted the numbers.
By: CassandraSays on February 17, 2009
at 8:26 pm
Brava, dear! This is the first I’ve read of your blog, and I love it. I hope your professor appreciates the material.
I found your op-ed especially interesting as I’m a fat American now living in Australia, and preparing to study for a career in education policy and nutrition (with a minor in Mandarin…don’t ask). I’ll be an old lady for the universities around here (I’m 30) but it’s a subject about which I’m passionate.
While I’m all for schools removing vending machines and providing balanced, healthful lunches (read: cooked food, not reheated, freeze-dried, deep-fried slop) they certainly have no right to dictate what a parent feeds their child.
Plus, teachers have enough trouble keeping up with 30+ students. I should know. I was raised by teachers. They already have to be watchdogs for abuse, neglect, lice, behavioral issues, etc. One wonders when teachers are supposed to have the time to…I dunno…teach?
Great post!
By: Kelly the City Mouse on March 4, 2009
at 7:29 am